Deacon: a haiku

Sometimes I wonder

About the thoughts of my dog

When I leave the room.

6 comments

  1. I love how you end with “when I leave the room” –leaving readers with a similar empty space afterwards as your dog has when you walk out. Though perhaps your dog doesn’t then contemplate how perfectly worded your poetry is, as readers do.

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  2. People tell me that dogs are like 2 year olds. So… they are probably thinking: “I think I have to poop”….or… I’m hungry…or….where’s my mom?….I wonder what we’re going to play today…..

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