I need a little pick-me-up
I’d rather not think about the fact that it’s been four years since I saw you last
I wish it were sunny outside, instead of overcast
I wish we were sitting at your kitchen table
It would probably be covered in shamrocks
or maybe your Easter decorations would already be out
There would be salt and pepper shakers, maybe a tub of butter
And probably crumbs from breakfast or lunch
It’s hard to believe that it has been four years,
since I picked up the phone to chat, exchanged a text message,
and listened to the advice you thought needed to be shared
It’s hard to believe that it has been four years
Part of Slice of Life by Two Writing Teachers March Slice a Day Challenge! I’m slicing every day this month. Thanks for stopping by.
There are so many people I can also think of, 1 year, 2 years, 10 years… thank you for reminding me, in your own way, of my need to reach out. I miss them, too. For those who I can reach out to I will do so.
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Loss is such a difficult emotion to process. You did a beautiful job describing the “hard to believe” in your poem.
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Thank you.
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Ugh. It is the fantastical aspect of loss that gets you. Almost beyond the permanence or the pain. Just…how difficult it is to even fathom. And how easy it is to notice how hard it is to understand. Thank you for this. You did a good thing here.
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Thank you for your kind words.
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I’d love to show my students the use of symbolism – sunny instead of overcast. Also how beautifully you’ve processed the emotion in so few words.
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Thank you!
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This is so powerful and heartfelt, and so relatable. I hope you get your pick-me-up.
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Thank you!
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I love the details in this slice of remembering. Especially the crumbs on the tablecloth. I could feel those. I can remember the crumbs on my grandma’s table from breakfast… Hugs, friend.
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Thank you!
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Though you don’t say your slice makes me think of a grandma. I love the picture of the holiday decorations on the table and the crumbs from lunch.
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Thank you, Beth. This slice was about my grandma ❤
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I really appreciate the thought you put into this slice and your vulnerability. The details make four years seem like yesterday… when at the same time, they feel so much longer. Hugsxo
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Thank you. Some days it feels like yesterday… and then it hits me how much she has missed.
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This is so beautifully and sensitively written. You have said so much in such a short slice. So sorry for your loss.
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Thank you! ❤
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Thanks for sharing this. I love how the memories are so simple. Isn’t it the truth that those are the ones that we miss most.
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So true!
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